Do you enjoy my poetry?

Some of it is adult material.





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Let me know your favorite. :)

Do you enjoy my poetry?
Pouring for Life is my favorite. In general, I don't care too much for your poetry. Sorry. Your poetry seems very simple and cliche. I mean, you're not the first person to write a poem about a rose. The ryhmes seem forced. For example, ryhming "Tivo" with "hero" is a bit of a stretch.





I like the alliteration "still stars" and the phrase "dripping rain laced embrace." This poem seems like you've spent more time playing with the sound of the words and putting it all together.





Sorry if my criticism is harsh. If it's any consolation, I don't know anything about poetry and certainly could not do any better.

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